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RWBY RED FIRST DRAFT by ALEXACEDEATH RWBY RED FIRST DRAFT by ALEXACEDEATH
My first draft for RED in the near future I may modify this paint this or even start again from scratch. Itīs just a side project! :D P.s. I know it does not look like it but I actually drew this by hand and then scanned it and cleaned it up a bit! The present version of this one is [link] and dont worry in the near future it will be finished! :D Oh and MONTY RULES! :D

Hereīs my progress so far

And hereīs the artwork I have of the other characters:

Weiss:

Black:

Update:
What are you still doing looking at this?
Go check my second go at drawing her instead! :D

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This character is easy to recognize; the outfit sis simple enough and still distinct.
Her cloak works really well in directimg the eye in a curve, and I think the scythe also works hand in hand with the cape because they both have the same curve. While looking at the cloak, I noticed that she appears to be missing her left arm. I'm just going to assume that it is hidden behind the part of the cape that twists around. If that is so, I think most of the folds wouldn't be there since the arm supports it.
I think you could improve on the knees, so you can pravtice by looking up anatomy studies, especially for the bone structure.
What do you think?
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Naotic Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I see you're improving a lot on the eyes! They blend in a lot nicer now :D
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well actually this one is from last year so in any case I actually got worst in drawing the eyes since I drew this hehe :iconsweatdropplz:
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Naotic Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh haha xD
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
One thing that makes me a bit mad about this is that although it has a respectable amount of daily views is that itīs been downloaded too much! :( Guys if you do that please leave a fav! īCause 650 downloads and 39 favs is a bit frustrating :(
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MinyMints Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so cute XD
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much! :D It means a lot! :D
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Pretty good so far :D When is RED coming out exactly?
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! :D :D :D :D
You mean Rwby, the trailer for Ruby (Red) or the drawing itself?
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :D I meant the Rvby.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh well, I suppose the series should start on february or march maybe, right before season 11 of RVB starts! :D
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sounds awesome. And I also can't wait for the new series of RvB to begin :D
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Me neither I canīt wait to see what monty does with the new halo 4 engine! :D Itīs going to be legend- wait for it DARY! :D :D :D
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Karageorges Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Really cute!!
Nice drawing in black an white!
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Why thanks dude it means a lot! And stay tuned for when I release the painted version! :D
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EdensSpirit Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Dayum, your lineart is really good!
Wish I could draw smoothly.. every time I try I'm all like RAKTAKTAKATKTAKTKTRTKAK with my pen... OTL
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh wow, Thank you so much it means a lot! :D
P.s. Youīre artwork is simply breathtaking and I just adore your art style! :D
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Psyghostis Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Great smooth lineart.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! :D :D :D
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
OK watchers and fellow deviants just wanted you guys to know that Iīll soon be releasing the painted and edited version of this so keep and eye out, and donīt forget to comment, fav, and watch! :D
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reaper12313 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Cool you should check mine
Question is that a scythe
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
First thanks second yeah itīs a scythe I know it cam out a little more curvy than I wanted it to look but hey it works! :D
P.s. Iīve seen some of your work... Itīs really cool stuff! XD
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reaper12313 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Thanks lol it ain't to great just done stuff I've done in spare time
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
What are you kidding? Itīs pretty good stuff! It may be a bit on the simplistic side but that doesnt mean it aint great, trust me add a bit of shadowing here and there and you got a great piece of artwork in your hands! :D
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reaper12313 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Aww thanks
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No prob it's the awesome truth!
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reaper12313 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Hahaha thanks
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