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Rwby Draft finished but yet to be painted! by ALEXACEDEATH Rwby Draft finished but yet to be painted! by ALEXACEDEATH
Ok so I finally finished the draft of Rwby, Iīm honestly a bit proud of how I finished the Crescent Rose, it was murder to draw it onto my original draft, now until my Ps trouble solves itself I wont be able to paint it. Oh but Iīm dying to finish it Iīve already designed the background and everythinng! So stay tuned! :D Oh and MONTY RULES! :D

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And hereīs the artwork I have of the other characters:

Weiss:

Black:
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I'm just going to start of saying that I love that sycth design. I can't wait to see it's coloring. I really like her character design and clothing. However one of the things that are bothering me is her skirt. Is it suppose to be an asymmetrical design because to my sewing/fabric knowledge if a skirt flairs out like that, it should be longer on that side. What I mean to say is that if her skirt is all one even length than that side should be a bit shorter. The other article of clothing that is bothering me is the bottom end of the cloak. That last bit of it, I would think, wouldn't be standing up so straight unless she is in mid-spin. I would like to see some fold/wrinkle lines in that part to give it more fabric life. Your hands and body proportions look very nice to my eyes. I could see her chin being a bit pointy, but if that is the style you are going for, then I think it is fine. My last comment is that she seems very ridged and stiff, especially in the legs. It seems to be a little unnatural.
I am really excited to see it completely finished and colored. I love what colors you do have on in right now and can't wait to see it pop!
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TheRafaLee Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Hey a friend of mine just sent me RWBY first episode, that looks really interesting.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist

IKR! XD I really canīt wait for the next episode, for now the show is surpassing my expectations! :D

BTW Thereīs a movie poster contest made by the guys at RT, you interested?

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TheRafaLee Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Well maybe, can you send me a link for that? thanks.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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TheRafaLee Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks man!
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
No prob dude! :D
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minieverfeel Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Been a while? First of thanks for the fave. Second, I need general colors for the skirt, corset, ends of the sleeves, jewels on her belt and if the scythe is of lighter or darker metal.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
First off, I know right, second no prob! :D Third I got something that should help you perfectly for this [link] [link]
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minieverfeel Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
I will hopefully have it done this weekend, and up on Monday, but I cannot make promises based on the fact for the next 2 weekd I have finals.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Donīt worry take your time, canīt wait to see what you make though! :D
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