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Rwby Draft finished but yet to be painted! by ALEXACEDEATH Rwby Draft finished but yet to be painted! by ALEXACEDEATH
Ok so I finally finished the draft of Rwby, Iīm honestly a bit proud of how I finished the Crescent Rose, it was murder to draw it onto my original draft, now until my Ps trouble solves itself I wont be able to paint it. Oh but Iīm dying to finish it Iīve already designed the background and everythinng! So stay tuned! :D Oh and MONTY RULES! :D

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And hereīs the artwork I have of the other characters:

Weiss:

Black:
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I'm just going to start of saying that I love that sycth design. I can't wait to see it's coloring. I really like her character design and clothing. However one of the things that are bothering me is her skirt. Is it suppose to be an asymmetrical design because to my sewing/fabric knowledge if a skirt flairs out like that, it should be longer on that side. What I mean to say is that if her skirt is all one even length than that side should be a bit shorter. The other article of clothing that is bothering me is the bottom end of the cloak. That last bit of it, I would think, wouldn't be standing up so straight unless she is in mid-spin. I would like to see some fold/wrinkle lines in that part to give it more fabric life. Your hands and body proportions look very nice to my eyes. I could see her chin being a bit pointy, but if that is the style you are going for, then I think it is fine. My last comment is that she seems very ridged and stiff, especially in the legs. It seems to be a little unnatural.
I am really excited to see it completely finished and colored. I love what colors you do have on in right now and can't wait to see it pop!
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TheRafaLee Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Hey a friend of mine just sent me RWBY first episode, that looks really interesting.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist

IKR! XD I really canīt wait for the next episode, for now the show is surpassing my expectations! :D

BTW Thereīs a movie poster contest made by the guys at RT, you interested?

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TheRafaLee Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Well maybe, can you send me a link for that? thanks.
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:iconalexacedeath:
ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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TheRafaLee Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks man!
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
No prob dude! :D
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minieverfeel Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Been a while? First of thanks for the fave. Second, I need general colors for the skirt, corset, ends of the sleeves, jewels on her belt and if the scythe is of lighter or darker metal.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
First off, I know right, second no prob! :D Third I got something that should help you perfectly for this [link] [link]
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minieverfeel Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
I will hopefully have it done this weekend, and up on Monday, but I cannot make promises based on the fact for the next 2 weekd I have finals.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Donīt worry take your time, canīt wait to see what you make though! :D
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minieverfeel Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! I hope to meet your excitement.
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:iconalexacedeath:
ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I bet you will! :D
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Xuruki Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013   Digital Artist
Great Potential ! :D Keep it up ! :)
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wow thanks a lot! :D I actually gave up on this a while ago, finished my redesign for it though, but I havenīt had time to upload it yet! :D
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EdensSpirit Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I wish I could draw smooth lines like you, but alas, I am a sketch artist OTL
It's legit though. Good job! ^^

P.S. dat scythe... :icondatpastaplz:
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:iconalexacedeath:
ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much! :D But I think your art is still fantastic! :D I donīt think I could paint as good as you not even in a thousand years! :D
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Amamii-kun Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Omg it's awesomeeeeeeee~ The sythe is so cool!!!! :icondroolplz: Want one~ ;3;
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! :D :D :D Glad youy like it! :D
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Looking awesome so far :D
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:iconalexacedeath:
ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks it means a lot! :D
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure :D Can't wait to see the completed version!
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:iconalexacedeath:
ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much on all the support! :D
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TheRafaLee Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
oh this will look good in colors, love her weapon is so full of details.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh thanks a ton man! It took a really long time to get the crescent rose right and I canīt wait to finish painting her! :D :D :D :D
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TheRafaLee Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
i can't wait to see that painted will look great.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
THANKS! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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Just-a-Bud Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can see you've put a lot of effort into this one so far and I like were you are going with it. If I'm not mistaken this is the end of the trailer right? when all the shell casings are falling?
The skirt looks quite good and I notice you have been consistent with your source for the wind throughout the other clothing items. The scythe is really good! I had so much trouble with that OTL well done. The arms are good and you appear to have a talent for hands. I'm jealous. In terms of the legs they are too cylindrical. You need to taper them in around the knees and emphasise the calfs from the ankles. [link] the girl is a pretty good example.... just google it if you are stuck. The face is a little off. The jaw line should change direction about half way and start heading up to where the ear should be. Example of jaw~ [link]
The clothes folds on the arm make no sense. Try and keep sleeve folds to the elbow, shoulder, or cuff (if necessary). because this is where the fabric gathers or is pulled. I like what you have started to do with the cloak. It might look a little odd though because the angle it changed direction is too fast and it doesn't flow, or because of the 2D thing I mentioned before. Don't connect the lines when fabric folds like that. To make it more flowy the creases in the back of the cloak could be longer but you have the right idea about the direction.
Colour wise it looks good. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see this finished.
I hope this helped. It's now 12:30am so I'm starting to get sleepy and out of it. ^^;
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much and once again I couldnt agree with you more, I really had trouble drawing the legs. Also I see what you mean with some of the folds, like the ones on her left arm right? Yeah Iīm hoping that Iīll be able to fix that once I start colouring again, and I know what you mean with the face I actually started using the one at the end of the trailer but at the moment the only clear picture of her face was this [link] so as you see I had to improvise a bit hehe :D And yeah I know what you mean with the cape hopefully Iīll be able to fix that too with Ps. Once again Thanks so much! :D :D :D :D :D :D
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Just-a-Bud Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad I could be helpful. ^u^
and yes I mean the arm on our left. Her right arm.
You're welcome. It's really no biggie. hehe I just type out my thoughts and suggestions. Critiques are actually really good for me too because it teaches you how to critically examine a picture and thing about how to improve it which I can use on myself.
Good luck! Can't wait to see the finished product.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much!
P.s. I dont know if you would mind but I just finished a new Oc and want you to tell me what you think on him please! :D [link]
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Just-a-Bud Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
Done, Hope that helps.
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yes it has! :D
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Just-a-Bud Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's good then. XD
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