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Ok so I finally finished the draft of Rwby, Iīm honestly a bit proud of how I finished the Crescent Rose, it was murder to draw it onto my original draft, now until my Ps trouble solves itself I wont be able to paint it. Oh but Iīm dying to finish it Iīve already designed the background and everythinng! So stay tuned! :D Oh and MONTY RULES! :D

Before:

And hereīs the artwork I have of the other characters:

Weiss:

Black:
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Critique by *StarlingKia Jan 22, 2013, 9:09:29 PM
I'm just going to start of saying that I love that sycth design. I can't wait to see it's coloring. I really like her character design and clothing. However one of the things that are bothering me is her skirt. Is it suppose to be an asymmetrical design because to my sewing/fabric knowledge if a skirt flairs out like that, it should be longer on that side. What I mean to say is that if her skirt is all one even length than that side should be a bit shorter. The other article of clothing that is bothering me is the bottom end of the cloak. That last bit of it, I would think, wouldn't be standing up so straight unless she is in mid-spin. I would like to see some fold/wrinkle lines in that part to give it more fabric life. Your hands and body proportions look very nice to my eyes. I could see her chin being a bit pointy, but if that is the style you are going for, then I think it is fine. My last comment is that she seems very ridged and stiff, especially in the legs. It seems to be a little unnatural.
I am really excited to see it completely finished and colored. I love what colors you do have on in right now and can't wait to see it pop!
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~minieverfeel May 2, 2013
Been a while? First of thanks for the fave. Second, I need general colors for the skirt, corset, ends of the sleeves, jewels on her belt and if the scythe is of lighter or darker metal.
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Mood: Joy *ALEXACEDEATH May 2, 2013
First off, I know right, second no prob! :D Third I got something that should help you perfectly for this [link] [link]
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~minieverfeel May 2, 2013
I will hopefully have it done this weekend, and up on Monday, but I cannot make promises based on the fact for the next 2 weekd I have finals.
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Mood: Joy *ALEXACEDEATH May 3, 2013
Donīt worry take your time, canīt wait to see what you make though! :D
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~minieverfeel May 3, 2013
Thank you! I hope to meet your excitement.
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Mood: Joy *ALEXACEDEATH May 3, 2013
I bet you will! :D
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Mood: Love ~Xuruki Apr 15, 2013   Digital Artist
Great Potential ! :D Keep it up ! :)
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Mood: Joy *ALEXACEDEATH Apr 19, 2013
Wow thanks a lot! :D I actually gave up on this a while ago, finished my redesign for it though, but I havenīt had time to upload it yet! :D
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*EdensSpirit Feb 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I wish I could draw smooth lines like you, but alas, I am a sketch artist OTL
It's legit though. Good job! ^^

P.S. dat scythe... :icondatpastaplz:
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Mood: Joy *ALEXACEDEATH Feb 14, 2013
Thanks so much! :D But I think your art is still fantastic! :D I donīt think I could paint as good as you not even in a thousand years! :D
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